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Thursday, October 29, 2009

life meets at NH-8 @ 9 AM

TARUN KAUSHIK WRITES AGAIN, THIS TIME A VERY COOL RHYME....

CHEK OUT .....

LIFE MEETS AT NH-8 AT 9 AM






Well, it was the last hairpin to be attached,

Into the beautiful blossoming bouquet

But the alarming sound of the car interrupted,

She looked back with lack of amazement

But full of anguishness and disagreement

Seems wanted to convey a small message

Which must have been something like that,

Car has no wings and if it would have had

She would have flew over the the bloody traffic jam.

And as if that was not enough,

Cab upfront took an emergency break,

With no mercy taking the poor car bumper on stake.

The scene, a regular one on our NH8 and in style if we say,

Life meets NH8 at 9:00 AM everyday.

Peak office hours, lack of synchronized traffic,

Haphazard moving vehicles and

Some more uncontrolled tragic

But the significant part ,amidst all these drama,

People still reach their offices with 10 min of dilemma

Life in a metro is we all talk about,

Sometimes even proud of living the way we walk out.

But is there anything more to talk of,

Same weekends every time, though we wait for.

May be a beer or two or even a disc can’t be ruled out.

For smokers, it’s not an issue as it hardly cuts the number short.

But that’s not possible on all the weekends

When your mom firing bombs on your head end.

You have still to complete those boring family assignments,

Which you hate to be made a part of but you have all the commitments

And what if your dad caught you making plans for some cool outing,

A fury of unwanted suggestions which makes you feel like shouting.

And take my word dude; your evening is completely done.

And you realize how time runs.

Go for early sleep without any sorrow

As Sunday is the only thing waiting for you tomorrow.





Sun on high and family waiting for you in the dining room,

And you left your bed around 12:00 in the noon.

Few plans getting through, few still to get executed,

And others only into the making though unexpected.

But most of them getting dumped which certainly is not a new thing,

As the records of last 12 weekends bring.

And as the sun set himself to reach the other end of sky,

Sunday had met with yet another speechless and a boring cry

Hardly had you decided the combination of your next day wearing,

Even shoes could not get polished with the night disappearing.

Moreover you don’t even know when the last song kept repeating,

Until your mom switched off your PC and found you sleeping.”

Get ready for the day my son”, you can hear his voice

Bringing you out of your dreams without your own choice

Hey that’s your dad and a cup of tea lying beside you

Eyes going straight to the nearest watch and you need to run through.

Monday blues gets further worsened,

When your cab driver warns you again

“Sir, you could have been left today as well” and you can feel your vein.

What else man!! Yet another journey starts in its way

Through NH8 which meets life at 9:00 AM everyday.

7 comments:

shruti sargam said...

The guest writes very explicitly.
Siting the scene with eyes of a traveler who wanders with an aim.
An aim to see all aspects of one realm.
NH-8 is a bridge to connect people from across the country and globe, who come with aspirations and dreams....It is just the beginning of the journey, so well illustrated.I could live it in words.
keep inspiring!! keep writing!

funkyrave said...

Hmm Awesome.
How do people write so creatively..
Few lines were not just rhyming they were also so realistic.
keep posting
cheerio

surbhit said...

yes di, he does and he was wasting is talent by just keeping the posts to himself....
The rhyme is just so awesome.
When you go to your office early in the morning you jsut don't get time to think about this side of your journey
and this person took time to write a whole rhyme

@ ravi ask urself how do u write so creatively :)

Rohit said...

Well structured and well written. I get a sense as if m there and can picture all myself.
6.0/6.0
Bingo !!

Anonymous said...

Surbhit, Thanks for giving light to my write ups.

Shruti, Am really relished for ur insight into my expressions.

Also thanks to funkyrave and rohit for appreciating my work.

Neeraj Agrahari said...

प्रिय मित्र तरुण जी,

ऊपर लिखी सभी टिपण्णी कि भांति मैं भी आपकी क्रियात्मक शैली कि प्रशंशा करना चाहूँगा| वास्तव में आप अपने भीतर छिपे लेखक को मार रहे थे | आप अपनी अधिक से अधिक रचनाओं का हमे अध्ययन करने का अवसर प्रदान करने की अनुकम्पा करें |

धन्यवाद |

Naman Choudhary said...

too gud...seems like....music................people say music lights up words.....music fills in feelings in words...but after reading this bhaiyaa...i realised..words are itself complete........my life too meets at nh8 on ur blog..........too gud..!!!!

 
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