so out of the place;
my loved ones r not wid me;
n they dint leave any trace;
.
my mind is reminiscing;
the tym that we had;
but now its all over;
n it feels so f***ing bad;
..
if you can hear it then i'l say;
m not happy without u today;
baby can't you come back n stay;
cus i promise u i'l never let u go away;
away from me, again......
..
my mind so numb now
n the ground is so cold
i still remember you
though i've grown so old...
.
i still feel your touch
i still need love
i still rem i told u
i aint going anywhere
..
if you can hear it then i'l say;
m not happy without u today;
baby can't you come back n stay;
cus i promise u i'l never let u go away;
away from me, again......
..
.
now that m in pieces
where r u now
m looking for your love,
can i get it sumhow....
4 comments:
Dude it moved me..!!
nice 1..infact best of urs..
god bless ya..
keep posting..!!
hmmmmmmmmmmm
long tym haan?????
anywayz
nice lines
niceeeee...a good poem ,straight frm d heart,just one piece of advice,just follow some rhyming scheme(dis dsnt mean i din like it :) ),,,,though i loved every line......great goin.keep writing.
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