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Thursday, May 21, 2009

m feelin so lonely;
so out of the place;
my loved ones r not wid me;
n they dint leave any trace;
.
my mind is reminiscing;
the tym that we had;
but now its all over;
n it feels so f***ing bad;
..
if you can hear it then i'l say;
m not happy without u today;
baby can't you come back n stay;
cus i promise u i'l never let u go away;
away from me, again......
..
my mind so numb now
 n the ground is so cold
i still remember you
though i've grown so old...
.
i still feel your touch
i still need love
i still rem i told u
i aint going  anywhere
..
if you can hear it then i'l say;
m not happy without u today;
baby can't you come back n stay;
cus i promise u i'l never let u go away;
away from me, again......
..
.
now that m in pieces
where r u now
m looking for your love,
can i get it sumhow....

4 comments:

funkyrave said...
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funkyrave said...

Dude it moved me..!!
nice 1..infact best of urs..
god bless ya..
keep posting..!!

vandy said...

hmmmmmmmmmmm
long tym haan?????

anywayz

nice lines

shruti said...

niceeeee...a good poem ,straight frm d heart,just one piece of advice,just follow some rhyming scheme(dis dsnt mean i din like it :) ),,,,though i loved every line......great goin.keep writing.

 
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