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Monday, February 22, 2010

The story that transformed me PART THREE

befor starting with this post, you should read this post .This is a continuation to the post linked.



vishal was sitting in the hospital for his fiance' was undergoing a brain surgery following a serious accident, that happened on her way to indore, where the ceremony was scheduled

ashima was in the O.T
vishal was sitting outside, and his dad and and brother were busy arranging things where the family of aashima was to be shifted, only ashima was having critical injuries, rest all his family were having fractures.
The Doctor came out of the room, and called out vishal.
"yes doctor, is she fine?" vishal sounded tired and exhausted
"See, we have removed the clot, but she is not responding to us, her pulse is on, she breathing, she is alive"
"if she is then why is she not responding doctor"
"son she is in a state of coma" said the doctor, putting his hand on vishal's shoulder
vishal did not say anything, he was shocked,
he went back and everything that was happening did not matter to him...
vishal was staring at the floor, thinking about the pain ashima might be in
His Dad and brother were talking to the doctor
Vishal got up and left
He unlocked his car and reached his place..
He went straight up to his room, through the garden which had a decorated stage, he walked through empty stalls, everything seemed to be hollow now.
He opened his almirah and there in front of him was a ring, a diamond ring, which ashima selected for herself.
He held the ring and cried, he cried for a long time, untill he felt his brothers hand on his shoulder.

i saw bhaiya and i could see a tear in his eyes, it was very dark and i was feeling cold
so he told me to go down, we were in the room, which certainly was warm, he opened his almirah and took a file folder out.
He opened it and showed me a photograph,
It was him standing, dressed impressively in a cream colored suit, beside him there was a ashima, dressed in a red suit, lying on the bed, eyes closed, and the third person was vishal, who was holding ashima's hand, with a ring......
and bhaiya said
"she is my bhabhi...."

ashima is in delhi, still in coma, it has been three years now, vishal is working and is living with her, he has appointed two nurses to take care of his wife,
ashima once moved her hand and that was the day vishal got her a new necklace...
vishal is happy to be with her and waiting for her to talk to him someday.
ashima never said anything, but i think she is also very happy...
if love can cure
then it will

tc
luv
sub!!!

10 comments:

Eksha said...

touched...!!

Unknown said...

phew......

no words......

vandy said...

awesome

i'll pray fr ashima

true love still exists great

Unknown said...

OMG!!! that was really good ... it was awesome .. i loved it ...

keep writing .. :)

funkyrave said...

It has been 5 mins, and i am still thinking what to comment. Hope she gets well, and hats off to Vishal. We keep on saying this world is full of crap.. it isnt. may god bless ya. keep writing.. :-) Thanks for this post. Cheerio :-)

SEPO said...

love will definitely cure ashima one day...!
loved the posti

Rohit said...

Have to feel for Ashima!

What words. Keep writing. This is a request!

Anonymous said...

It has really taken me out of my comfort zone. I am speechless, I am numb, I am feeling uneasy. But at the end of it all, I am feeling bit happy. I have seldom heard stories of unconditional love. And this one will specially have a special place in my heart. Well I will pray to God that Ashima gets well soon. May their lives be filled wit the greatest joys of life as they have already suffered a plenty.

surbhit said...

Thanks for all your support...
Thanx for reading my posts
m overwhelmed.
special thanx to eksha, vandana and ravi (my real followers)
And to you too, you always visit my blog, but dont comment... thoug i wait for it... and once i got it :), i was grinning all day long :)
thanx shobhna, nimisha and sneha...
and thanx rohit man, ur request will e honored :P ;P lol
tc....

vandy said...

hey i'm touched

u mentioned my name there
*wink*

 
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